I don't know what Tom was thinking...
... or whoever put this on the front page. Seriously, fuck EVERYTHING about this.
There was little to no effort put into this at all. It's a straight-up trace of the original opening.
You just signed up yesterday, no flash experience before this most likely, and then all of a sudden you produce a decent animation? No way. Guys, don't be fooled by this, he auto-traced it. Don't keep giving him 10's and 9's, he doesn't deserve it.
Not enough effort went into the actual writing of this song. There were hardly any differences from the original song, and when there were differences, they were incredibly simple.
The animation was kinda meh, You have good art, but it was mostly tweens, I want to see some fbf action, man.
Concept was alright. It was nothing spectacular considering the song was pretty much constructed for you. The original song was pretty much describing drugs.
The voice. Oh... my... god. It was horrible. It also doesn't help that you auto-tuned the shit out of it. I'm sorry, I don't mean to offend you, you're just not the singing kind of person. There are tons of voice actors on this site who would probably love to take the opportunity to sing something like this, take advantage of it.
I have to admit, though... I do love weed.
... But it's not funny. You're definitely trying way too hard.
I can see a lot of effort went into this.
However, I have to complain that the whole thing was just a little too hectic. Next time try giving your viewers a few seconds to breathe every now and then, let them figure out what's going on, y'know?
You definitely know what you're doing with camera angles and camera movement, and that's part of what made this flash so distinguishable from the rest.
Your artwork could do with some improvement, but that will come with time. Remember, take your time on the majority of your drawings. You can cop out on a few in-between frames here and there, but you have to keep your key frames looking nice.
Once again, it looks like you put a lot of effort into this flash, keep up the good work.
Despite your little problem....
Okay listen, so apparently, stress renders you unable to animate well? Uh...huh. And not wanting to leave things unfinished should never prevent you from putting in ACTUAL EFFORT. And if it does, well then you don't have what it takes to be an animator.
It was good
I liked it, the art was good, the voice was good, I just thought it was a little too close to Adventure Time, so I'm going to have to deduct a few points for that.
I've only seen Adventure Time once on youtube actually.
The story is almost as bad as the voice acting.
Oh wait, it's worse.
Thanks for the absolutely WORTHLESS review
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